Monday, 22 August 2016

Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing Self  Assessment


Written by Hayley-Jane

Prompt




If you could live anywhere in the world where would you live?


If I could live anywhere in the world I would live in New Zealand of course.I strongly believe that New Zealand is the place too be.

For any of my overseas readers I might as well share my reasons why.

Honestly I love New Zealand and you should consider a holiday at some point in life if you don’t live in the beautiful Aotearoa already.


Firstly, one of the reasons I love Aotearoa is in New Zealand we are all family and everyone cares for everyone.Don’t you love a good friendly place too be.

But also one of the personal reasons I love New Zealand is because my amazing family is spread out all through New Zealand and I love exploring all the new places I have never been too.

Also Air New Zealand has great service if your looking for a quick trip.


Secondly, New Zealand has a great culture and many fun attractions.
Personally one of my favourite attractions is going up too Mount Ruapehu and going skiing or snowboarding.
I also like going to Wanganui going too Kowhai park Lake Taupo is also really fun and so are many other places.
I proved my point with these reason.
Well I hope so anyway  :)

Thirdly, living in New Zealand is also an educational opportunity with such a large culture there so many things too learn about in New Zealand.
Another fun thing in New Zealand is Kapa Haka performances.
New Zealand has lots of museums and more.
I have two favourite museums the war memorial in Wanganui and Te papa in Wellington. There’s also amazing beaches all through New Zealand.
There is so many more things too do in New Zealand like diving, snorkeling, swimming, snowboarding and of course way more.

So in this persuasive text i’m hoping I have displayed many great features of New Zealand.
Even though it is not an argument i’m pretty sure it counts as a persuasive text as it has included the structure and set out of a normal persuasive argument.
Although too be fair it's actually a large variety too select from.

1 comment:

  1. i like your story and how it is long and interesting

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