Persuasive writing
Dear Mr Corlett today I am going too try persuade you to let olivia and I have our own reading group as we work well as a team and we are very capable of running our own reading group and we would have different activities every week just like everybody else in this class and here are just some of the reasons why.
Olivia and I aren’t exactly learning anything honestly in our reading groups because the way reading runs in our class we don’t find fun and if something isn’t fun then Olivia and I both don’t take much interest in participating but if Olivia and I got too choose our own activities it would make olivia and I very focused so we could keep our group together.
Now reasons why I would like to work with olivia, working with Olivia is an opportunity for both of us too learn off of each other's work .
Olivia and I work great together and would be able too stay focused with Olivia and we would be able too get lots more work done and set goals for each other and as a team as well.
Kind Regards Hayley
hzaha thanks
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you using what you learnt with persuasive writing Hayley. Good to see you using paragraphs in your writing. It's an interesting idea Hayley. I'd like to know some more.
ReplyDeleteWhat sort of books would you like to have as your readers? If you have activities to go with them what might they be? If we tried it one week to see if it works, it could fit in the own choice section of your task list. So would it be just the two of you or would you want others joining in with you?
Kind regards,
Mr Corlett
Yay we would do all sorts like book reviews because those are our favourite activities and we would find online activities and yes it would just be the two of us in the group.
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