I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

100 Word Story

There I laid in the middle of the floor just before half of the ceiling shielding me collapsed on me within 5 minutes everyone around me was gone for good. I don’t understand how i even got out no memory except for trauma.It was the worst day ever my best friend was almost digested by a crocodile that was 4.2 meters long and a mouth wide enough to literally swallow another crocodile!!!

But in the end I blame the earthquakes for my disastrous day and clearly just bad karma for the crocodile.

Quote

What we love determines what we look for

What we look for determines what

We think and do

What we think and do determines

what we are and Who we are